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fueledbytylerr
06-10-2008, 03:52 PM
well, i've got a signature in the
making&i wanted some opinions on it.
also, if you have any ideas
of what to add to it, don't
hesitate to post it.
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z206/SurfxD/SHESFRESHTODEATHwithouttextorsid-1.png

Rotten
06-10-2008, 04:05 PM
I think it is absolutely stunning, really. Very good so far. :]

fueledbytylerr
06-11-2008, 10:19 AM
I think it is absolutely stunning, really. Very good so far. :]
:D
thanks.
that means alot.
any more comments?

Eltiny14
06-11-2008, 10:53 AM
That looks awesome :D. Great job! I can't think of anything you could add to it it's so great!

Wonder
06-11-2008, 11:38 AM
Wooow! i wish i could do that! but i cant :p

fueledbytylerr
06-11-2008, 12:07 PM
That looks awesome :D. Great job! I can't think of anything you could add to it it's so great!
thank you.
[:
wow, nothing else?
&i thought it looked
kinda plain, rofl.
Wooow! i wish i could do that! but i cant :p
hah, it took me plenty of practice.
[:
&lots of help from fellow graphic
artists, as well as lots of tutorials.
thanks for your comment.

xDeidara
06-14-2008, 06:36 PM
well, i've got a signature in the
making&i wanted some opinions on it.
also, if you have any ideas
of what to add to it, don't
hesitate to post it.
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z206/SurfxD/SHESFRESHTODEATHwithouttextorsid-1.png

Heyyy; Miss me? [:

5/10 (considering it isn't done)

Love the creativity, but you gotta make it flow more. The scribbles totally take away from the picture/focal... Since the peoples are b&w, my eyes were attracted to the colours in the background, then me trying to figure out what the graffiti says. :P The right side is just, like sitting there, without a purpose. Since the rendering/peeps are on the left, the right is just like, not a visiual, since you don't even look at it during your first glance. The b&w is good, so you can see the lighting better, but not good on top of colours, since it stands out so much... Maybe add some photomanip. and tinting to it. (It will help it blend with your background more too.) I see how you have the colour circles, maybe as a light source, but work on the occapacity, and placement, since you want it to add and enhance it to the graphic, not dominate or stick out.

Still, I dunno where the text is gonna go, so yeah. (If you're planning to put it on the right though, it has to be big to notice, since the colour circle/lighting just takes away and almost blinds you. And if the text is too big, it'll dominate over the sig, and the peoples seem to be the headline.)

Umm yeahh. :] Honest critism. Love it, hate it, it's how the world goes 'round. :D

- Dare

fueledbytylerr
06-14-2008, 07:25 PM
Heyyy; Miss me? [:

5/10 (considering it isn't done)

Love the creativity, but you gotta make it flow more. The scribbles totally take away from the picture/focal... Since the peoples are b&w, my eyes were attracted to the colours in the background, then me trying to figure out what the graffiti says. :P The right side is just, like sitting there, without a purpose. Since the rendering/peeps are on the left, the right is just like, not a visiual, since you don't even look at it during your first glance. The b&w is good, so you can see the lighting better, but not good on top of colours, since it stands out so much... Maybe add some photomanip. and tinting to it. (It will help it blend with your background more too.) I see how you have the colour circles, maybe as a light source, but work on the occapacity, and placement, since you want it to add and enhance it to the graphic, not dominate or stick out.

Still, I dunno where the text is gonna go, so yeah. (If you're planning to put it on the right though, it has to be big to notice, since the colour circle/lighting just takes away and almost blinds you. And if the text is too big, it'll dominate over the sig, and the peoples seem to be the headline.)

Umm yeahh. :] Honest critism. Love it, hate it, it's how the world goes 'round. :D

- Dare
of course i missed you.
[;
this C&C really means
alot to me&i thank
you for taking time
out of your day to
give it.
i think, after what i've
heard, i'll try some
of your ideas out.
obviously, i cant take away
the scribbles unless i want
to completely redo the whole
signature, but as for the
other things, i will
try to take them into
consideration.
thanks again.
;D

xDeidara
06-14-2008, 07:47 PM
I think GIMP has layers... I would try using layers and stuff, it'll help you organize, edit, etc. a lot easier.

& no probb., glad you appreciate it. :]

- Dare

inaCRAZE
06-14-2008, 07:49 PM
beautiful.
stunning.
amazing.
heart the scribbles.
just the flashing light is
a bit blinding. [:
but all and all;
it's fabulous.

Kimcub
06-26-2008, 10:54 AM
oh wow.
tyler's that's amazing.
9/10.

for text i would put kind of a grungy font with an outline.
maybe orange text with a blue outline ?

Cutehalloweengirl
06-27-2008, 02:15 AM
ok who is the girl

CarrieMileyCeline
06-27-2008, 03:43 AM
Pretty good.
But you need some text.
Have like a white text with black outline,
and a font sorta fat and big for the particular blend.
And possibly like a little light behind the text.

NeonMagicJazz
06-27-2008, 05:55 AM
Wow that's absolutely amazing!
I agree - Don't add anything to it :)