Halloween Essay

[Ghostmaker56]

So, I am like making a Halloween essay!!! I not telling you why though becuase it is my buisness. Please not this is a rough draft.

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"It's the Monster Bash!" That all you can hear when the CD player is playing at full volume. Ding Dong!!!!!!!!! You hear a deafing ring coming from the door. You slowy start to walk and you reach for the handle. BOO!!!!!! You quickly jump and get scared out of your wits. "Trick or treat!" You just found out that it is a 8 year old in a ghost costume made of a white blanknet with holes for his eyes.

Anyone can quickly guess what this night is. If you dont, it Halloween!!! Or Hallow Eve or All Hallows' Even or ...........you get the point.


That is what I have now I will posting more soon :D

Please tell me how it is!

Remember it is a rough draft!:1674:

[GhostStitchGirl]

Great so far! Keep on adding :)

[Ghostmaker56]

Ok I going to add more!


Part 2:

But do you EVEN know where Halloween came from? Well, it came from Thriller by Michael Jackson! Just kidding! It came from a Celtric festival called Sambain. In Sambain,
they celebrate the end of the harvest season in the Gaelic culture. Sambain is also considered the Celtric's New Year. And guess what!!?? Like today, they wore costumes and mask but for a different reason because they didnt want candy. They wanted to mimic evil spirits.

But I dont even think you want to know that! You really want to know where trick or treating comes from. The time of the year when you go door to door asking and shouting for mouthwatering candy that you will eat in a second when you get home. Well, tricking or treating came from...To Be Cont.

[GhostStitchGirl]

I just learned something new today, lol :)
The best part of Halloween is the candy!
Keep adding! :) Great work so far :)

[Nenob]

I love it! Im learning alot! but are you sure that your aloud to use 1st and 2nd person?

[GhostStitchGirl]

I don't think it really matters.

[lil_little_Jessie]

that's great but the real way halloween was made you know x-mas well that's for jeses and halloween is for the devil all the evil spirts leave he double hockey sticks and scar ppl and they get until 12:00 o'clockand so that's the real way but plz keep going